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Re: Translations

Postby Pangu » 2014-09-15, 20:40

Tobias wrote:The background is not completely. The addressee of the postcard is a Chinese. So I would expect words like 惊异 not 吓. And "they" are the family of her.
And it's a friendly postcard.

I suppose then the best thing to do is ask the person who came up with that sentence :)

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Postby jamesang » 2014-11-17, 6:07

Hi, I have a portion of an advertisement for a language exchange that I'd like a native Chinese speaker to help me translate into Chinese.

Looking for people to practice your English in friendly, light-hearted conversations?
Seeking to make new friends with whom you can practice conversational English in a comfortable environment?
What are you waiting for? Come join us for our language exchanges now! Make new friends with native speakers learning English and start practicing your conversational skills today!

For more details and announcements, please join / like us at:
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Could someone help me please?

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Re: Translation

Postby azhong » 2014-11-18, 4:14

想找人透過友善輕鬆的談話練習英語嗎?
想結交新朋友,在舒適的環境練習英語會話嗎?
還在等什麼呢?快來參加我們的語言交流吧!與native speakers交友並學習英語,從今天開始練習你的會話!

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"native speakers"... I need help...
You are unlucky today to meet me, Jamesang; my Chinese is not good enough. haha

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Re: Translation

Postby Reinder » 2014-11-18, 5:46

azhong wrote:"native speakers"... I need help...
You are unlucky today to meet me, Jamesang; my Chinese is not good enough. haha
“以英语为母语的人”呢?
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Re: Translation

Postby OldBoring » 2014-11-18, 13:18

To keep it consistent with azhong's translation (Traditional script): 以英語為母語的人。

Also “英語母語人士”。

用中文表达这个概念有点绕嘴,所以现在很多外企都直接用英语 English native speakers..

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Postby jarradejuguito » 2014-12-23, 18:28

Hello, I have a question about a translation from chinese.
[flag=]en[/flag] Do you want me to go to the grocery and buy some apples?
[flag=]zh-tw[/flag] 你們要我去商店買些個蘋果?

Is this a correct chinese translation?
Thanks!

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Re: Translation

Postby Pangu » 2014-12-23, 18:46

jarradejuguito wrote:Hello, I have a question about a translation from chinese.
[flag=]en[/flag] Do you want me to go to the grocery and buy some apples?
[flag=]zh-tw[/flag] 你們要我去商店買些個蘋果?

Is this a correct chinese translation?
Thanks!

Close!

你(們)要我去商店買些蘋果

Because in English, there is distinction between singular and plural "you", I'm not sure which you intended here. So if it's singular, remove the 們, if plural, leave it in.

You don't need 個 here since you already have 些 as the measure word.

Don't forget the 嗎 to make it into a question ;)

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Re: Translation

Postby jarradejuguito » 2014-12-23, 19:02

Thank you!!
i want to say it in plural haha, also, i want to know if the english question that i wrote is correct or not. :mrgreen:

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Re: Translation

Postby Pangu » 2014-12-23, 19:39

jarradejuguito wrote:Thank you!!
i want to say it in plural haha, also, i want to know if the english question that i wrote is correct or not. :mrgreen:

The English part is correct. :)

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Re: Translations

Postby jarradejuguito » 2015-01-06, 2:34

謝謝,
我有第二題,我要知道如果這個短語是正確的:
“在古埃及,猶太人都畫上邊的他們的門用牛的血,因為上帝能知道這是一家猶太人的家。”
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Re: Translations

Postby ling » 2015-01-07, 3:50

jarradejuguito wrote:謝謝,
我有第二題,我要知道如果這個短語是正確的:
“在古埃及,猶太人都畫上邊的他們的門用牛的血,因為上帝能知道這是一家猶太人的家。”
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I'm not a native speaker of Chinese, but here are some suggestions (red means changes and additions; green with strikethrough means deletions):

我有第二題,我要知道如果這個短語是正確的:
The word 如果 is a conditional "if"; it doesn't bear the alternative English meaning of "if" as "whether (or not)". You could also replace 否 with 不是.

I think the following is closer to natural (though it would be better for a native speaker to comment):

“在古埃及,猶太人都用牛的血[來](something)他們的門上因為上帝知道這是一家猶太人的家。”

Where I wrote (something), you should put what they painted above the door.

The 來 is optional, but in this sentence it functions like "to", in its sense of purpose: "use cow blood to paint..."
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Re: Translation

Postby vijayjohn » 2015-03-16, 2:40

Pangu wrote:
jarradejuguito wrote:Thank you!!
i want to say it in plural haha, also, i want to know if the english question that i wrote is correct or not. :mrgreen:

The English part is correct. :)

I suppose so, but I'd say "grocery store" rather than just "grocery." (However, some people apparently do say just "grocery," although I can't remember ever hearing this in person).

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Re: Translations

Postby Diegolino81 » 2015-06-01, 5:36

Hey guys, could you please help me translate the following passage in Chinese?
I'm sorry if it's a little long!

Oh God
I did not know
how difficult love is
or how hard it would be
to be separated for yet just a month
My insides are torn with despair
inside my head are demons ripping at my thoughts

Oh, to be with you
will settle my dreams
holding you will calm my soul
allow me to sleep

I want to drink to forget the distance
to forget the planting of the demons
I stare at your image
imagining you smiling
eating and sleeping next to me.

The pain of this separation
is almost more than I can bear
you in your cozy home
and me all alone with my dreams

Your every move thrills me
the sound of your voice sends me
to ecstasy, a place of nirvana
Shangri-la

oh to drink coffee
and listen to jazz again
to make you smile
and feel your breath on my neck
will take me to the edge
of what life has to give
yes you can, bring to me
the happiness that only a woman
can bring to a man.

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Translate to Cantonese?

Postby Pasie » 2015-09-25, 21:47

Could you translate this to Cantonese?
Sin-Nei (My friend's Chinese name), it is not imbarasing to speak Japanese lol.
(Inside joke :D )

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Re: Identify the language and text

Postby OldBoring » 2015-11-04, 14:41

No larger text meh?

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Re: Translate to Cantonese?

Postby OldBoring » 2015-11-04, 15:29

Pasie wrote:Could you translate this to Cantonese?
Sin-Nei (My friend's Chinese name), it is not imbarasing to speak Japanese lol.
(Inside joke :D )


Hi Pasie,
I've never replied here because I don't know much Cantonese.

I could try with:

Sin-nei,  講日文唔係醜死鬼。

But then I don't speak Cantonese, and that's assuming your friend can read written colloquial Cantonese.

Otherwise, most Chinese dialect speakers usually write in Standard Chinese, so you could write:

Sin-nei,  講日語並不尷尬。

Assuming that most Chinese people in North America use Traditional script.
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Re: Identify the language and text

Postby vijayjohn » 2015-11-07, 1:53

OldBoring wrote:No larger text meh?

Gamerelite, what are these the hotkeys for? Some kind of online game?

OldBoring, you mean the font size, or the length of the text?

Here's the original text (in case you meant the font size wasn't large enough, OldBoring) and my attempt at a translation into English. I guess only OldBoring will be able to tell just how much I got wrong in this translation. :lol:

F1 (未)激活 主场方进球数99 = F1 (Dis)activate 99 (points?) home square score
F2 (未)激活 主场方进球数清零 = F2 (Dis)activate Reset home square score
F3 (未)激活 客场方进球数99 = F3 (Dis)activate 99 (points?) opponent square score
F4 (未)激活 客场方进球数清零 = F4 (Dis)activate Reset opponent square score
F5 (未)激活 直接结束比赛 = F5 (Dis)activate Directly end match
F6 (未)激活 最大比赛时间 = F6 (Dis)activate Longest match time
F7 (未)激活 无限体力 = F7 (Dis)activate Unlimited physical strength
F8 (未)激活 职业生涯无限金钱 = F8 (Dis)activate Unlimited career funds
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Re: Translation of hotkeys

Postby OldBoring » 2015-11-11, 13:25

I meant font size.

It seems like a sports game, probably football/soccer, but it could also be American football or basketball.
进球 means "score/point/goal" (what's the term used in sports?), lit. "enter the ball".
主场方 is the team who plays at home. Home team?
客场方 is the team who plays an away game. Visiting team?

The rest, you translated it correctly, but since I'm not sure how to reformulate the English translation, I'll leave that task to you. :D
But disactivate? I thought in English you said deactivate... or more commonly enable/disable. :hmm:

I'm not sure, but maybe in a sports context 体力 would be better translated as physical resistance?

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Re: Translations

Postby OldBoring » 2015-11-15, 13:08

Diegolino81 wrote:Hey guys, could you please help me translate the following passage in Chinese?
I'm sorry if it's a little long!

Oh God
I did not know
how difficult love is
or how hard it would be
to be separated for yet just a month
My insides are torn with despair
inside my head are demons ripping at my thoughts

Oh, to be with you
will settle my dreams
holding you will calm my soul
allow me to sleep

I want to drink to forget the distance
to forget the planting of the demons
I stare at your image
imagining you smiling
eating and sleeping next to me.

The pain of this separation
is almost more than I can bear
you in your cozy home
and me all alone with my dreams

Your every move thrills me
the sound of your voice sends me
to ecstasy, a place of nirvana
Shangri-la

oh to drink coffee
and listen to jazz again
to make you smile
and feel your breath on my neck
will take me to the edge
of what life has to give
yes you can, bring to me
the happiness that only a woman
can bring to a man.


It's difficult to translate poetry. You need a poet to translate it.
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Could someone please translate this for me?

Postby Daisychain » 2015-12-15, 8:41

:)
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