vijayjohn wrote:...
Hi Vijay,
Here's the piece I managed to compose from our discussion:
https://www.presskiss.com/post2/
Let me know what you think, what else I should include and so on.
I would also like to hear opinion on the following:
1) the website's name:
It was very difficult to find a free domain name - I was considering different options but that was the only thing that was free and sounded right. However, when searching for "presskiss" in Google, I initially found pornography and so on. So I would like to know what is the first thing that comes to a native's mind when he or she hears this word and if it works well as a memorable name of a news media.
2) the article's title - if I just call it "Can you thrive as one of colour in a racist world?" - is it clear enough, or do you think it's better to call it "Can you thrive as a person of colour in a racist world?" As always, I am trying to shorten my phrases as much as possible, especially when they are titles, but it also needs to be understandable.
As you saw, it took me forever to publish it and fix all the little details on the webpage I wanted to fix before I share it with the worldwide web, but now I think it is already at the point where I should start filling it with content :)