Mikey93 wrote:הַשוֹלֵט בתַבְלִין, ישלוט בתֵבֵל.
You can't say השולט של since שולט isn't a noun. (you may be confusing it with the word שליט)
I do like your choice of תבל, which coincidentally shares the exact same root as תבלין (and is in fact identical to the proper singular form of תבלין in Aramaic, from which language the word comes), and must wonder whether it was consciously made with this thought in mind or were you just looking for a fancy word for "universe". Kinda clever.
Also note that תבל is indefinite.
Mikey93 wrote:Insurmountable mediocrity reigns here, people are spineless, heinous atrocities are the order of the day, the maze of dishonesty will no more take anyone aback, it's just ferocious bloodthirsty predators and their powerless victims here.
בינוניות ללא תקנה מושלת פה, האנשים חסרי עמוד שדרה, זוועות מחרידות הן שגרת היום, מבוך האי-יושר כבר לא מזעזע אף אחד, אין כאן מלבד טורפים צמאי-דם אימתניים וקורבנותיהם חסרי הישע.
Meh, let's go for something easy this time.