REIMKRAFT #1

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REIMKRAFT #1

Postby schnaz » 2016-01-27, 17:34

Grussgott,

Allies in Ordnung mit Folgendem?
Is everything OK with the following ?

Er ist so knauserig,
Ich glaube fest
er wuerde wollen
den letzten Rest vom Schuetzenfest.

I firmly believe that he would want the leftovers at an archery competition.

(As opposed to a hunting expedition where there would actually be leftovers.)
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Re: REIMKRAFT #1

Postby Car » 2016-01-28, 12:11

A Schützenfest isn't the same as an archery competition:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sch%C3%BCtzenfest

What do you primarily want to know?
Please correct my mistakes!

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Re: REIMKRAFT #1

Postby schnaz » 2016-01-29, 15:17

Vielen Dank Car fuer Ihre Berichtigung
Thank you Car for your correction.
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Re: REIMKRAFT #1

Postby schnaz » 2016-01-29, 15:27

Ich schmiede Reime weil es macht mir Spass under uebrigens hilft es mich Vokabeln errinern zu konnen.
I put rhymes together because I enjoy it and also because it helps me to remember vocabulary.
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Re: REIMKRAFT #1

Postby schnaz » 2016-01-29, 15:48

Es gibt ein Klein Problem. Ich bin nie sicher dass die Reime Fehlerfrei waere.
There is a small problem. I am never sure that the rhymes are error free.
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verteilt habe aber ich neulich benutze handy und habe Angst wiedermals die ganze Sache zu verlieren.
Please excuse me dividing up my post but I just started to post with a cell phone and I'm afraid of losing the whole thing again.
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Re: REIMKRAFT #1

Postby vijayjohn » 2017-02-07, 3:30

Ich versuche, deine Fehler zu korrigieren :)
schnaz wrote:Ich schmiede Reime weil es macht mir Spass mir Spaß* macht under uebrigens hilft es mich mir, Vokabeln errinnern zu koönnen.
I put rhymes together because I enjoy it and also because it helps me to remember vocabulary.

German (de) *Die Rechtschreibung <Spass> verwendet man nur in der Schweiz und in Liechtenstein.
American English (en-US) *Only people in Switzerland and Liechtenstein use the spelling <Spass>.
schnaz wrote:Es gibt ein Kkleines Problem. Ich bin nie sicher, dass die Reime Ffehlerfrei waere sind.
There is a small problem. I am never sure that the rhymes are error free.
Verzeihung, dass ich mein meinen Post (oder „Beitrag”)
verteilt habe aber ich neulich benutze handy habe gerade angefangen, mit einem Handy Beiträge zu verfassen und habe Angst, wiedermals die ganze Sache den ganzen Reim wieder zu verlieren.
Please excuse me dividing up my post but I just started to post with a cell phone and I'm afraid of losing the whole thing again.

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Re: REIMKRAFT #1

Postby schnaz » 2017-02-10, 1:57

Vielen Dank vijayjohn,
Thanks a lot vijayjohn,

Deine Bemühungen werden ganz sicher nicht ergebnislos sein.
Your efforts will certainly not be in vain.

„....weil es mir Spaß macht“ ist richtig weil it is in a compound sentence as the subordinate clause and subordinating conjuctions such as weil, während
bis, als, wenn, da, ob, obwohl, and dass kick the verb to the end.

„hilft es mir“ is correct because „ helfen “is one of about fifty verbs that take the dative case.

„Erinern zu können“ is correct because it is the not much used simple past tense that doesn't have umlauts.

Erinnern, erinnern, erinnern, erinnern, erinnern,
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Re: REIMKRAFT #1

Postby vijayjohn » 2017-02-11, 0:05

schnaz wrote:Thanks a lot vijayjohn

Danke dir auch!
„Erinnern zu können“ is correct because it is the not much used simple past tense that doesn't have umlauts.

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Re: REIMKRAFT #1

Postby schnaz » 2017-02-11, 15:29

Zu:
Regarding:
„Es gibt ein kleines Problem“


Was ich getan sollen hätte ist:


Zuerst: Feststellen dass, „ Problem“ sachlich ist.


Zweitens: Beachten dass der sehr häufige Ausdruck „ Es gibt “ das Substantiv im Akkusative verlangt, weil es gramatikalisch ein direktes Objekt ist. (von deutsch-Philippinnen.web)


Drittens: Schau mal an meine Tabelle die zeigt dass eines Ajektive das folgt eines unbestimmter Artikel im Akkusative verlangt „ es “ am Ende.


What I should have done was:


Firstly, Ascertain that “ Problem “ is neuter.


Zweitens: Pay attention to the fact that the often used expression “ Es gibt “ requires that the noun which follows be in the accuative case because it is a direct object.


And thirdly: Check my table which would have shown me that when an adjective follows an indefinite article if the noun which the adjektive is modifying is neuter and in the accuative case then the ending “ es “ is required on the adjective.
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