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Re: [Game] Creating sentences

Posted: 2020-02-27, 17:27
by tiuwiu
In between the lines
there's a lot of obscurity
I'm not inclined to reside to maturity
if it's all right, then you're all wrong
but why bounce around to the same down song?
You'd rather run when you can't crawl ...

I know, you know (Psych Theme)

Re: [Game] Creating sentences

Posted: 2020-02-28, 8:36
by france-eesti
I saw him dancin' there by the record machine
I knew he must a been about seventeen
The beat was goin' strong
Playin' my favorite song

Joan Jett - I Love Rock 'n' Roll (the one and only song I ever sang in a concert) :D

Re: [Game] Creating sentences

Posted: 2020-02-28, 12:02
by azhong
You are sixteen going on seventeen
Baby, it´s time to think
Better beware, be canny and careful
Baby, you´re on the brink

<Sixteen going on seventeen>, from the film The Sound Of Music.

Re: [Game] Creating sentences

Posted: 2020-02-28, 19:54
by linguoboy
france-eesti wrote:a bit of messy water

"Dirty" is more appropriate to the context. The core meaning of "messy" is "in a state of disorder" or "creating a state of disorder". A "messy sandwich", for instance, is one that looks disordered and sloppy and/or creates a mess when you try to eat it; it's not a sandwich that is unsafe to eat.

azhong wrote:You could sway the cluster of messy weeds over your head; you could indulge the plentiful moss along your cheek. You need no more to worry about your costume and could wear whatever you like.

(你不妨搖曳著一頭的蓬草,不妨縱容你滿腮的苔蘚;你愛穿什麼就穿什麼。)

"Sway" is generally intransitive; weeds "sway" in the wind, but you "bend" them over your head.
You "indulge" a person or a pet, not an inanimate object like moss; a better translation of 縱容 here would be "tolerate" or "yield to".
"Costume" nowadays means "fancy dress"; the sense of "what one wears" is archaic.

azhong wrote:entering the heart zone of the town.

azhong wrote:Under such a distant overlook from the hilltop, it crawled slowly on like a long worm, a foraging centipede.

I'm confused by this image. An "overlook" is a spot which "overlooks" a portion of countryside. You see things "from" it but not "under" it; something "under an overlook" is effectively blocked from sight.