[Game] Creating sentences

Moderator: JackFrost

User avatar
linguoboy
Posts: 22310
Joined: 2009-08-25, 15:11
Real Name: Da
Location: Chicago
Country: US United States (United States)

Re: [Game] Creating sentences

Postby linguoboy » 2018-10-04, 15:41

france-eesti wrote:it turned out the huge quantity of C vitamin she forced herself to swallow turned out to be toxic for her liver.

Stylistic issue. The simplest way to fix it is to delete the first highlighted clause. Alternatively, if you want to keep that, change "turned out to be " to "was".
"Richmond is a real scholar; Owen just learns languages because he can't bear not to know what other people are saying."--Margaret Lattimore on her two sons

User avatar
azhong
Posts: 626
Joined: 2008-11-18, 9:06
Gender: male
Location: ZhangHua
Country: TW Taiwan (臺灣)

Re: [Game] Creating sentences

Postby azhong » 2018-10-11, 4:49

Christmas morning dawned, cold and white. Henry and Ron, the only ones left in their dormitory, were woken very early by Hermione, who burst in, fully dressed and carrying presents for them both. (from You-know-The-Book II)


Return to “English”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 3 guests