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“Do you recognize our guest, Draco?” asked Voldemort, stroking the snake’s snout with his wand-free hand.
Draco shook his head jerkily.
“But you would not have taken her classes,” said Voldemort. (re-narrated from chapter 1, HP 7.)
S1) (You don’t recognize our guest) because you didn’t take her classes. (NAE dialect mainly, I guess?)
S2)…but you didn’t take her classes.
S3) (You don’t recognize our guest) because you haven’t taken her classes. (BE dialect mainly?)
S4)…but you haven’t taken her classes.
So jubilant were they that they did not hear.
Shocked, I was.
Truly your forgiveness I implore.
Not another word did she say until they had left the village…
Yesterday a ship I saw.
Yesterday saw I a ship.
Tomorrow will come the decision.
Patience you must have.
Not another word did she say until they had left the village and were driving down a steep little hill, the road part of which had been cut so deeply into the soft soil, that the banks, fringed with blooming wild cherry-trees and slim white birches, were several feet above their heads.
(A passage growing from the previous one.)azhong wrote:(My writing practice.)
His dissenting voice spawned adverse reactions from almost all and sundry at once, a strong atmosphere of hostility shrouding him. The backlash, however, did not shake him but spurred his resolution to gain their approval. Standing straight with his fist holding tightly, his voice high but rational, he kept elaborating his proclaims.
azhong wrote:I am clearer now. But my next question, pls: why is being added in the modifier then? What subtle differences does its participation create? When had I better preserve it and when, leave it out? (Is S2 still natural with an one-word post-modifier?)
S1) He walked away, being hungry.
S2) He walked away, hungry.
azhong wrote:I have an inquiry about the bolded phrase, which soundsseems to make the sentence run-on, clear though to me because of the existence of were they. Am I correct?The great snake…opened its mouth wide and hissed angrily, but the Death Eaters did not hear it, so jubilant were they at Bellatrix and the Malfoys’ humiliation.
azhong wrote:A query about the bolded sentence, please. Thank you in advance for your reply.“Do you recognize our guest, Draco?” asked Voldemort, stroking the snake’s snout with his wand-free hand.
Draco shook his head jerkily.
“But you would not have taken her classes,” said Voldemort. (re-narrated from chapter 1, HP 7.)
Are my sentences below grammatical then? And, my question is, what subtle differences does Ms. Rowing’s sentence have with its special tense? What does “would” mean here? It is not a hypothetical tone, is it? Is her sentence with an implication that Voldemolt thought Draco was lying or something?
linguoboy wrote:azhong wrote:In the coffee shop it was almost empty now. Nick, the shopkeeper, was standing by the water tank[1] behind the bar at a corner of the room, cleaning cups and dishes. At another far corner[2] in front of Nick sat two malemen, whom Nick was unfamiliar with. They were young. Their bodies were both well-shaped, with muscles from gyms. One was obviously less strong than the other, though. They chatted and teased each other, their voices being gentle.
azhong wrote:In the snug coffee shop it was almost empty now.
azhong wrote:The shopkeeper Nick was making good use of his time to do the washing-up by the bar sink. In front of him, at the far corner
azhong wrote:sat the only table of customers, two unfamiliar young men. Both looked fit; even the less muscular also displayed under his white tank top a figure that was no doubt the product of many hours spent in the gym. They chatted cheerfully, their voices gentle, and slightly pranked each other at times.
linguoboy wrote:azhong wrote:The shopkeeper Nick was making good use of his time to do the washing-up by the bar sink. In front of him, at the far corner
I don't really get what's being described. Why would Nick be facing "the far corner" while working at a sink? Generally in a coffee shop, the sink is oriented so that while working at it you face a wall or you face toward the entrance so if there's only one person working that person can keep an eye on who's coming in.
azhong wrote:If Nick stands against a wall and faces the inner space so that he can see its whole scope, can I say that all these things he can see were “in front of Nick”?
azhong wrote:If it is allowed, furthermore, as long as Nick doesn’t happen to stand exactly in the middle line where the farther two corners will be equally distant, there would naturally be a far corner to Nick, wouldn’t there? Is it improper to name the position in this case as “at the far corner in front of Nick”?
azhong wrote:Or perhaps, should I say it more precisely like - unsure if these terms are natural - “at the far corner in his front left/right” or “at the far corner sideways”?
azhong wrote:The basic sentence structure in English is
Subject – auxiliary verb – transitive verb – object --, or
Subject – auxiliary verb – intransitive verb –
Thus, there are mainly three also grammatical but more skillful positions, labelled (a), (b), and (c).
Subject -(a)- Auxiliary verb -(b)- Verb -(c)- object or something else
azhong wrote:Why asking? He surely is nice.
He sings well.
*He well sings. (unsure but sounding rare to me.)
azhong wrote:Harry paid dearly for his moment of fun. (from chapter 1, HP2)
*Harry dearly paid for his moment of fun. ( made by me. Unsure but sounding weird, too.)
azhong wrote:He sings surely well.
azhong wrote:Also, another related question: if I intend to move the “incessantly” into the middle of the sentence,
"He kept elaborating his claims incessantly."
I guess the most correlative word to it is “elaborating”? Thus I will say
S1)He kept incessantly elaborating his claims.
S2)He kept elaborating incessantly his claims.
Which one of them is better? And I guess either of the two is better than
S3)He incessantly kept elaborating incessantly his claims.
linguoboy wrote:azhong wrote:Hearing the customers’ laughter rise a bit higher, Nick glanced up over the coffee mill. There, the less-stronger one was hitting his mate on the head with his fist. His mate, sitting straight and still, accepted this gift. Nick smiled and drew his attentionwent back to his cleaning. Cold, cozy water flowed down through Nick's fingers.
azhong wrote:linguoboy wrote:azhong wrote:Hearing the customers’ laughter rise a bit higher, Nick glanced up over the coffee mill. There, the less-stronger one was hitting his mate on the head with his fist. His mate, sitting straight and still, accepted this gift. Nick smiled and drew his attentionwent back to his cleaning. Cold, cozy water flowed down through Nick's fingers.
(A practice grown from the earlier. Is the sentence in bold a successful double inversion?)
azhong wrote:Being hHearing the customers’ chuckles escalating into chortles, Nick glanced up out the corner of his eyes in and in time to see, over the coffee mill, he saw in time the less-muscular of the two stretching out his arm and hitting his buddy on the head.
azhong wrote:Not a solid bump had he applied, even Nick at a distance also knew by noticing that the springing fist sped down palpably as it approached.
azhong wrote:Although stronger, the attacked received what he was bestowed with glee by sitting bolt upright and still.
azhong wrote:Not even when Nick drew his attention back to his errands with smiles
azhong wrote:did the fist get off the head. The soapy forks, mugs and dishes clinked, much more softly than the way those rods and bats stroke in the fights among gangs.
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