How is the following sentence in your conlangs?

PaulSh · Postby **PaulSh** » 2013-01-19, 22:43

How is the following sentence in your conlangs?

"One the begininng God created heaven and the earth"

in saejsk rajd :

"Aupa dou antevlor Deo krea selo e dou erd"
/Opa: də ɛntevləʁ Di krwa sil i: də əʁd"

hashi · Postby **hashi** » 2013-01-20, 21:10

PaulSh wrote:How is the following sentence in your conlangs?

"One the begininng God created heaven and the earth"

I need this in correct English before I can translate it.

Llawygath · Postby **Llawygath** » 2013-01-21, 1:06

It's supposed to be 'in the beginning', isn't it?

Emandir · Postby **Emandir** » 2013-01-23, 10:18

Mean hashi! You know it's Genesis 1:1, don't you? :silly:

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Cámpe:
h'ólfa ngáje nteránci lelóhi mbáambo
/ˈɲɔlfa ˈnʒaje nteˈrantʃi leˈlɔɲi ˈmbaambo/
beginning god creation-his DAT-sky earth-and

Mu-xyan:
zi lwar tris ta lyu ya nal pi xam
/ði lwɑr θris θɑ lju jɑ nɑl ɸi ʃɑm/
LOC beginning creation 3p god ALL sky and earth

language learner · Postby **language learner** » 2013-01-23, 18:17

Do you happen to have a topic about the latter conlang?

Emandir · Postby **Emandir** » 2013-01-23, 21:41

имен wrote:Do you happen to have a topic about the latter conlang?

No, I just posted in the "Interpreter Translation Game" thread - but I've thought about it... when I have time !

Quetzalcoatl · Postby **Quetzalcoatl** » 2013-01-25, 19:09

Štonšul Thonšo Wonjoi ya čeičai wayazit.

[Štonš-ul Thonš-o Wonj-oi ya čeič-ai wa<ya>z-i-t]
beginning-LOC god-NOM.SG heaven-ACC.SG and earth-ACC.SG create<PAST>-SG-3.PFV

Kshaard · Postby **Kshaard** » 2013-02-05, 20:44

Tlipin-uk Folm-uk maltantal Syalk yemigig uk-etlu pan.
space-the Earth-the past-create God begin-prespartic-noun the-real-DAT on
Etl (or 'real') in this and most cases doesn't mean 'real' - it is used when you want to show the case of the previous noun.

EoKlaus · Postby **EoKlaus** » 2013-02-16, 13:12

In Grafi vors (not finished yet)

Anvas âge-lekse va âge-jek âgu-arh em-uithe-țâ.
(God the hevean and the earth in the beginning created)

the strees is on every first vowel from every word. The â, î. ț (ts) are from Romanian language. When I will learn more on IPA I will edit this post.

More on Grafi vors here

Freebooter · Postby **Freebooter** » 2013-02-21, 23:06

In the beginning God created heaven and earth!
"En du bugonen Gude chriatad Hafunn anz Erde!"
Pronounced: "Ehn doo boogoe-nen Goodeh chree-ahtahd hahfoon ahnz airdeh!" Note: "Ch" is as in German.

My language is just a hobby, simple and easy. Sentence structure is as in English, pronunciation of vowels and words, etc, as in German. Just something I am playing with.
Freebooter

linguoboy · Postby **linguoboy** » 2013-02-21, 23:09

Freebooter wrote:In the beginning God created heaven and earth!
"En du bugonen Gude chriatad Hafunn anz Erde!"
Pronounced: "Ehn doo boogoe-nen Goodeh chree-ahtahd hahfoon ahnz airdeh!" Note: "Ch" is as in German.

My language is just a hobby, simple and easy. Sentence structure is as in English, pronunciation of vowels and words, etc, as in German. Just something I am playing with.
Freebooter

In German, z represents [ʦ], not [z]. That is, anz would be pronounced "uhnts".

Freebooter · Postby **Freebooter** » 2013-02-22, 1:15

Thanks for that correction. I forgot about the German Z at the end of a word. Here it is straight from my little "dictionary": ("And: anz; pron; ahntz" ) and you can see I have the "z" right, just forgot it here when I posted that. Besides, been a long time since I spent a couple of years in Germany in the army (1973-74) and studied German a bit. I loved Germany by the way.
RB

Ciarán12 · Postby **Ciarán12** » 2013-02-22, 22:47

“Be kśawpśnar, xwegweye ztrowze te ztriśed Mnuiś hio.”
"In the beginning God created heaven and earth."
[on begin-nominalizer-Adp.Case.Def., create-Dist.Past.(infix) heaven-Com.Case.Def. and earth-Com.Case.Def. God Pron.*]

*The pronoun "hio" is an archaic/very formal masculine pronoun usually used when certain affixes that are normally added to a subject pronoun need to be used when a noun is the subject, but whose use is yet more formal when no such affix is used (yet the dummy pronoun is still present).

Narbleh · Postby **Narbleh** » 2013-03-06, 22:56

Tjeemõ, Heele aldesje eivą a-mąą.
/ˈtʃɛː mɔ̃ ˈhɛː lɛ ˈal dɛ ʃɛ ˈʔɛj vɑ ʔa ˈmɑː/
tjee-mõ heele alde-sje sky-0 and-earth-0
[begin-TEMPOR god create-PAST.3sg sky-ACC and=earth-ACC

cafaristeir · Postby **cafaristeir** » 2013-03-07, 17:02

In Sambahsa :

IN-KAP Elohîms kwohr waurns ed ardh.

http://fr.scribd.com/doc/38673695/in-kap

Wlquos · Postby **Wlquos** » 2013-04-04, 11:22

En anakap Deivo gone tod akmon eti tod dheghom.

cafaristeir · Postby **cafaristeir** » 2013-04-04, 12:25

Wlquos wrote:En anakap Deivo gone tod akmon eti tod dheghom.

Typically IE-based. Is your conlang project now ready ?

In fact, if there are many differences between the Sambahsa version and yours, this is because I used the (French) translation by Chouraqui, which is very close to the Hebrew (Semitic) text. Thus, this led me to use "ardh" (partly from Semitic) rather than "(di)ghom". In Sambahsa, "akmen" means "vault", not exactly "sky". Here, the matter is about the "surrounding sky" *wer, which was supposed to be made of water.

In PIE, I would translate : K^rrôH2_tikset Dyêws werunòm/H2ék^menm ghzém-kwe

K^rrôH2 is a special locative for "head".
"tikset" < "titk^ét" < root *tek^; cf. Latin "texere", Greek "tektôn"; unstressed here in second position and in the imperfective, since PIE worked with aspects.
For *ghzém, I followed Beekes, *dhgh^ém-m.

Olivier

leander11 · Postby **leander11** » 2013-04-08, 21:26

Sodilin terko nipanon ranurit em järot.
beginning-in god create-past-masculine3rdperson heaven-acc and earth-acc
The fat vowels are emphasized.

Fox Saint-Just · Postby **Fox Saint-Just** » 2013-04-09, 14:19

In kaixi Dev pa kreat tyan i arda.

DarcX2 · Postby **DarcX2** » 2013-04-16, 6:15

Zin Falg zen vergyr ew zen negar bu zun hurje venpraut.
(Using English's phonetics:
zeen fawlg zen fehr-gir ef zen neh-gar boo zoon hoor-che* ven-prowt.)

*the "ch" is guttural, as in "loch."

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