Hello, ladies and gentlemen here:
This is my first post, after my gaining knowledge of Indonesian in this blog these months through your plentiful posts. Thank all who ever contribute to this blog; you are my language teachers not only of bahasa Indonesia but also of English. Saya sangat berterima kasih.
Therefore I'd also like, in my response, to post something for my language pactrice and for your fun, or to laugh maybe. Below is a short paragraph written in my poor bahasa Indonesia and my poor English, a very brief introduction of my country, Taiwan. You will see my bahasa indonesia is far away from what I need now to express what I want to say. Any correction, not only for my Indonesian but also for my English, from any friends is sincerely appreciated and will surely be much helpful to improve my language. Thanks in advance for your kind help, for spending your precious time on my terrible writing.
Sincerely yours,
Azhong
===(Below is my writing: Azhong Comes From Taiwan)
Apa kabar semuanya:
(How are you, everyone: / Hello everyone:)
Assalam mu'alaikum.
(How are you.)
Saya nama Azhung, dari Taiwan.
(My name is Azhong, from Taiwan.)
Taiwan adalah di tenggara yang Asia, sebuat pulau yang dekat Hongkong , Mainland China, di selatan yang Jepang. Psati di atas laut dan di bawah langit.
(Taiwan is at the south-east of Asia, an island which is near Hongkong, mainland China, and at the south of Japan. Of course over the sea and under the sky. ^_^ )
Bentuknya pulau Taiwan kelihatanya seperti 'sweet potato'.
(The shape of Taiwan island looks like a sweet potato.)
'Sweet potato' adalah sebuah tanam bahwa punya hidup tenaga yang kuat; Itu tumbuh yang mudah, nggak usah tertalu dijaga.
(Sweet potato is a kind of plant that has strong life; it grows easily without delicate caring needed. )
Tanam ini terus jadi sebuat metafora yang sangat penting untuk orang-orang Taiwan, terutama ketiga nogmong tengang sejarahnya kolonial yang tidak senang selama ratus-ratus tahun baru-baru ini.
(This plant is then become a very important metaphor for taiwanese, especially when mentioning about its unpleasant colonial history for these recent hundred years. */*)
Sampai taraf tertentu kolonial itu sejarah yang Taiwan adalah agak spertinya yang Indonesia, sejauh saya tahu.
(To some extent the colonial history of Taiwan is rather like that of Indonesia, as far as I have known. )
Maskipun di Taiwan juga sperti di kebanyakan negara ada berberapa dialect-dialect, orang-orang Taiwan semuanya mengerti dan bisa bicara dalam bahasa mandarin. Orang yang berusia belum lima phluh tahun juga pernah diajarkan bahasa Inglis di waktu sekolah.
(Although Taiwan just like most of the countries has several dialects, all Taiwanese understand and can speak Chinese. People of age less than fifty are also ever taught English at school.)
Sangat ingin tahu kesan Pak dan Ibu tentang negara saya dan bangsa-bangsa saya, bagus dan buruk, kalau ada. Terutama kesan yang buruk.
(I desire to know your impression of my country and my people, for both good and bad, if any. Especially bad impression.)
Dapakah saya dikasih tahu? Terima kasih banyak.
(Am I honored to be told? Thank you very much.)
Salam,
(Greetings,)
Azhong