Je voudrais some help...

[xuyleh]

Hi guys =)

I'm new to this forum and I need some help. I have to translate some ads to French. I've done so but my French is not exactly excellent... If you have any suggestions on how to make them better / clearer (or if there is a glaring mistake in them) I would really appreciate the help. Maybe I could e-mail them to you? It's like 9 short sentences in total.

Thanks so much!

Stella