How is the following sentence in your conlangs?

[Koko]

Bhéki /be'kaɪ/:

Madìnu jì dyũkevax Hôd aenẏ saosee sènhu̇v vi.
/'medɪnə dzhɪ 'djuki:veʒ hov i:nɪ seosi: sεnhʊv vaɪ/
(Heavens-ACC.FEM.PL. and[3] sky-ACC.MASC.SING. had-IRR.TPS. created-REG.PAST.INF. beginning in)

Kōnen /ko'nεn/:

Ló māndôeỳ, Gäth chär bhaeß k'ccäh t'rû.
(In beginning, God[loanword] had make/made the-heaven and-sky)
/lɔ men'dɔɪ gɑð tʃαr be:s ksα: t ru/
OR
Ló māndôeỳ, Gäth chär ccäh t'méà.
/lɔ men'dɔɪ gαð tʃαr be:s ksα: t 'meə/

[Kshaard]

The use of [α] as an IPA symbol is unorthodox - is it [a] or [ä] or [ɑ] or what?

[~jakip]

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[Koko]

The use of [α] as an IPA symbol is unorthodox - is it [a] or [ä] or [ɑ] or what?

The latter, i was much too lazy to use a character map(was doing this on iPod, so i used the Greek Alpha.) Sorry if that confused you

[aappaatsoq]

Ono arhis'in, Tengir et Kayrab Deios lahula cokko pastat.

This would be the most accurate translation into Dilaxca, but Dilaxcarat aren't Christian and have no Christian influence. Their mythology and culture is heavily based on Persian (Zoroastrism, Mazdeism) and Turkic ones, with minor influences of Buddhism and Islam.

[yasmin-kasumi]

帝神노、初네、天웨위地웨刅얀 [d͡ʑigaːno d͡ʑiɾane toː we wi hid͡ʑe we hiwojan]
God [nom.], begining [temp./loc.], heaven [acc.] and earth [acc.] create [past]

Gloss.
帝神 [d͡ʑigaː] God
初 [d͡ʑiɾa] the begining; the starts
天 [toː] heaven; sky
地 [hid͡ʑe] earth; land
刅요 [hiwojo] to create

[Levike]

Isoktstem Jerur treziviot drobosti ik tarosti.

iso - one
isokto - first
isokstem - firstly

Jerur - God ( "Jerry" with modified look and -ur ending for masculine noun )
trezot - gives
treziviot - gave

drobo - sky ( Clădirea Dorobanți is the tallest building here )
drobosti - sky in acusative
ik - and
taro - earth ( in a movie Earth was called Tauri )
tarosti - earth in accusative

[XvoltaireX]

Øçirai: ænu xëea' diøwanu jådi maødia ea'øḫanu ønudi aøraxë'e
(In the dawn, God made heaven and earth)

[emorjon2]

"In the begininng God created heaven and the earth"

In astuurusprêm:

"In de ginn Iqummä montêv de ciio tu de umoplo."

ê = ea in hear
q = gi in religion
c = sh in english
ä = a in cat
u = ou in hilarious
i = i in bit
e = e in bet
o = o in roll

[Koko]

Should recommend you learn IPA. Otherwise many will misinterpret how to pronounce your language.

[s.wilhelmy0247]

In the beginning God created heaven and Earth

Ni et ninägäg, Gåd dätärk näväe dnaj tzrä.

[Levike]

Updating it to the current state of the language.

Alfó bea Jerur legót fost galilósti meg tavrósti.

Literally: Beginning in God makes was sky and earth.

[Fox Saint-Just]

Updating Novbasa:

Na kayxi Dew li canzao akax wa arda.

[abc_conlang_123]

In prinzipi, Diu 'r fažè ur zér e ra tèra.
[ iŋ priŋˈtsipi diu rfaˈʒɛ ur tser e ra tɛra ]